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Jul 5, 2006 11:39:58 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 5, 2006 11:39:58 GMT -5
I feel like a total stranger....
Okino stopped running, huffing anf puffing for air. She looked behind, wondering if the poacher was after her still. The young female platinum fox walked onward, unkowingly into lands that were not familiar. She breathed in the crisp air, and smelled unfamiliars. Other foxes, and planty of them. She was torn whether to stay or the go somewhere else... they probably wouldn't accept a young female fox not yet ready to have kits.
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New Kit
Jul 5, 2006 15:09:08 GMT -5
Post by ((~~Kovik~~)) on Jul 5, 2006 15:09:08 GMT -5
Could you possibly put your characters' info into categories like history, appearance, personality and such? Look at another bio like Koviks', Shadows or anyone elses'. Sorry if I seem a bit fussy, but please organise your bio the way that everyone elses' is.  |
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New Kit
Jul 5, 2006 15:36:26 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 5, 2006 15:36:26 GMT -5
I understand... I feel wierd in a place like this... never been here!
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New Kit
Jul 5, 2006 15:42:38 GMT -5
Post by ((~~Kovik~~)) on Jul 5, 2006 15:42:38 GMT -5
Ah its OK, I felt the same. But you get used to this site after a while, its brilliant. And I'm sure once the bio is modifyed slightly, it'll be fine  |
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New Kit
Jul 5, 2006 15:43:37 GMT -5
Post by ((~~Kovik~~)) on Jul 5, 2006 15:43:37 GMT -5
And yay, you have a platinum fox as well! Not many of those around here actually, I'm glad theres another ^^
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New Kit
Jul 5, 2006 15:51:40 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 5, 2006 15:51:40 GMT -5
Name: Okino
Gender: female
Age: 1 summer (not old enought ot have kits)
Side: Light
Personality: Very shy and untrusting die to the fact that she was the youngest of the litter, and was often last to get everything... Okino is quite weak in comparison to other foxes. She tries to make things better for her, but they never turn out as they should.
Appearance: A platinum fox...
History: The 'runt' if you will, of the litter, Okino is weaker than most, but does her best to try to learn to hunt. But she is never swift enough, or quick enough. If survival of the fittest ruled (which it does) Okino would die.
IC: A silver dart ambled out of the dense juniper undergrowth, and almost instantly stopped to gasp for air. She looked back, her golden eyes searching for movement, ears erect and tense, listening. There was none, not even the caw of a raven miles away or the breeze brushing branches agaisnt eachother. It was completely silent. And that's what had made her mother send her and her siblings scattering. It had been too quiet, and her mother knew it was a hunter. She growled at them to run, that if they didn't, night would come upon them very, very soon. Okino hadn't paid any attention to which direction to where her brothers and sisters had fled- she was too frightened to. And now, she was alone, in an open snowy field, open for any attack...
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New Kit
Jul 5, 2006 16:01:35 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 5, 2006 16:01:35 GMT -5
Where do I start playing at? I'm not sure what to do from here...
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New Kit
Jul 5, 2006 16:04:33 GMT -5
Post by ((~~Kovik~~)) on Jul 5, 2006 16:04:33 GMT -5
Accepted and you could always start by RPing at Operation Far Cry as a recruit arriving to check on the plans for war. I'm afraid its a bit late to RP at camp; everyones' on the battlefield now lol But it'll be fine, just make a post in 'Operation Far Cry' and I'll reply. (Ooh, my 666th post! Scary!) |
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Post by Northern Light on Jul 6, 2006 3:41:37 GMT -5
-tackles Okino in slow motion- Hello! ^o^ Come on, just like we practiced guys...  LOL, just kidding. Could you put up a picture of your fox? If you found one and you want it to be decorated ask Sendiri, Chira, or Sakitu. They are great in that kind of things. |
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Post by ((~~Kovik~~)) on Jul 6, 2006 6:00:11 GMT -5
*glares at eebil post*
Well, I'm past the evil number of posts. Yay!
And thank ya Light *bows*
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New Kit
Jul 6, 2006 11:07:15 GMT -5
Post by Northern Light on Jul 6, 2006 11:07:15 GMT -5
LOL, glad 'bout that.. o,O; WOAH, you post even more then me every day xP
No problemo! ^o^
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New Kit
Jul 6, 2006 14:13:39 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 6, 2006 14:13:39 GMT -5
Uhm... there are no pics of my fox... I tried to search the internet, but slow internet doesn't help, and If I do see one, the web-blocker doesn't let me in... grrrr....
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Jul 6, 2006 14:22:23 GMT -5
Post by Northern Light on Jul 6, 2006 14:22:23 GMT -5
Well... what are you searching for? ^-^
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Jul 6, 2006 14:25:59 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 6, 2006 14:25:59 GMT -5
a pic of a plat. fox... urm..... and I can't draw foxes all that well....
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Jul 6, 2006 14:30:55 GMT -5
Post by ((~~Kovik~~)) on Jul 6, 2006 14:30:55 GMT -5
I'll try and find some too, this is the only one I could get right now ~  |
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Jul 6, 2006 14:32:22 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 6, 2006 14:32:22 GMT -5
EEh! It's cute!
Why is it I can never find anything?
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New Kit
Jul 6, 2006 14:33:08 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 6, 2006 14:33:08 GMT -5
What kind of fox is Chira? And Kovik? And Lights? Just curious...
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New Kit
Jul 6, 2006 14:42:26 GMT -5
Post by ((~~Kovik~~)) on Jul 6, 2006 14:42:26 GMT -5
Well Chira is a platinum fox, Kovik is a gray wolf cub in its black phase (hence the siggie) and Light is a red fox |
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New Kit
Jul 6, 2006 14:44:45 GMT -5
Post by *Okino-^-Marku* on Jul 6, 2006 14:44:45 GMT -5
*gasp* so you're one of the other few plats.... cooly!
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New Kit
Jul 6, 2006 14:48:11 GMT -5
Post by ((~~Kovik~~)) on Jul 6, 2006 14:48:11 GMT -5
Yup!! 'Tis good to have another platinum fox ^^ At least I'm not alone (I don't think there are any others; I think there was one called Tahir but that one was dropped).
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