Palla

[colbalt]

Character’s name: Palla
Gender: female
Alliance: light
Desired Position: eep i dunno
Personality: kind and sweathearted
Appearance: a white pelt that almost looked silver
History: While protecting her, her mate fought a rouge male wolf and lost. She now roams the land searching for a new army that would take her before her pups are born
Picture: www.wolfinternationalfreight.com/images/wolf2.jpg
IC:

A silver fae walked out amoung the lands. He stepping was silent as she pushed down in the soft ground. Her amber pupils scanned the area for preditors before setting out in a short gallop. After a while she paused and sat letting her loungs breathe. Her silver pelt gently moved in the gentle breeze. She was well built besides the rounded belly where he pups now dwelled. SHe was nearly due and desperately needed to find a army who would take her. Palla raised her maw to the heavens and sent her song flying through the heavens. After a satifying song she lowered her maw and waited


this one is for anotehr rpg I did but for a male wolf

A white male wolf layed in a cave, it was dark and the moon was shinning above. His white fur blew in the gentle breeze of the cave. His white paws neatly folded in front of him. The moonlight shown (sp?) above him in a skylight above him. Soon he stood up, and slowly walked forwards to the entrance of the cave. He looked up at the moon; he flung his head back, and gave a sharp howl. His cross-shape scar on his left cheek sparkled in the moon's light. His eyes also sparkled, his blind eye glistenened (sp?) even more than his right. He was alone, and he'd always been since he was a pup. His calling kiba, the white wolf

[Kero Jana]

Not bad... The moderators might push you to be a little more descriptive though. Just a couple of more sentences for the personality to give them a picture of her actions towards others and a little more to talk about when they see your characters appearance as well. other than that, not bad.^^

[colbalt]

i usually like to develop her personality as a roleplay.

[Kero Jana]

yup, I can see that from your IC: you definitely have experience I'll give you that. I'm sure they would love to have you. but if I haven't said this. I don't have the power to accept you. I'm not a moderator. Plus the admin got suspended from the computer so it might be a while till you get your rank.

[colbalt]

I understand that and thanks for you great input. I'm willing to await anotehr mods opinion before i rpg. My experience as a semi literate just started a few months back so bare with me for a while

[Kero Jana]

thats okay. I'm not very good with giving descriptions in my post. I leave the painting of the pictures to those who read my character sheet. which is why mine are so lengthy. ^^

[colbalt]

ah i see, i usually just develop their personalities as I rpg. It's fun to play with their personalities. Twisting them until they're just right

[Kero Jana]

you can read them if you like there on the second or third page.

but as a fare warning they are very long. and I don't exagerate.

[colbalt]

hee hee i belive you. My literacy level rised quit increasingly when one of my horse rpg sites became a literate site. It was dificult at start but i soon grew in to it.

[Sakitu]

Rofl, I think it's fine. I believe I'm allowed to Accept people. I understand the whole developing thing too. xD

"Accepted"

[colbalt]

yay thanks where can i post to get her claimed?

[Kero Jana]

You can post anywhere in the light area 'The Warm South'. You could also go to 'The Cold North', but beware. Light's aren't very welcome in the darks territory. I would choose the most recently updated thread there as a starting point.

Right now, the lights and darks are involved in a battle in 'Operation Random Rampage'. You could join in there as well if you wanted to. Just don't expect to get out without a scratch.^^

I know I didn't.,-_-, *sniff* FUKU!!!

[colbalt]

yeah i don't think palla will be joining being pregnat and all XD

[Kero Jana]

Pregnant!!, 0_0,-_-, ^_^;........oh I see, you editted it. eheh...*wonders how could I have missed that detail*

[colbalt]

yeah i usually start palla out pregnat and abandoned by her mate who died to save her

[Kero Jana]

interesting scenario. I never heard of that one being used anywhere. ^^

then again I'm not one for those kinds of things. Especially pregnancy. I just wouldn't know how to play that kind of role.^^;

There's only so much a man can do before he reaches his limits and I draw the line at sex and pregnancy in RP'ing.

[colbalt]

XD i'm a little more advanced on that scale.

[۝ Etapa ۝]

Lol, That's much like Hajakari... Mah boy Solitude was murdered trying to protect her from her many enemies, and she woke up from "demon mode" to find him dead... And she thought she'd killed him. xD

Meh, rambling again. xD I'm so gonna put up their stories... It'd be an intresting read, and it'd stop me from randomly starting off about their pasts anyways. xD

*slaps self*

Anywaaays... I'd say accepted also, though I don't actually have the authority to do so. :3
There are a few minor grammatical errors, but nothin' you can't fix with some experience and a pain-in-the-arse like me to correct you.

Just an example - "Layed" is not a word. And spellcheck might not go amiss either... Feel free to ignore me, I'm just being a Literacy Nazi again. xD


And sorry about your foxies Kero... *whines* It's just the sort of thing I'd always think of Etapa & Hajakari as doing, and I was pretty pissed-off then too... So I wasn't as merciful as I could have been. >.>
I have a tendancy to get carried away when I've got the chance to kill someone. xD

[colbalt]

Ha ha i know my selling and grammer is way off. The second example is an older one and has tones of grammer issues.

[Kero Jana]

Ti's alright Whisper... It was more my fault though. I wanted to end the battle as soon as possible, it's completely my own fault for giving up. Though you were strong, I played a weak role session, which ended up in my own demise. I congratulate you on beating me. You are to be my rival, along with Thyca, and I shall do better next time.