Kanine

[Kanine]

Character’s name: Kanine
Age: teen
Breed: Wolf
Gender:male
Alliance: Dark
Desired Rank: Private First Class
Personality: Scheming, somewhat flirty, moody
Appearance: Jet black with Emerald eyes
History: Kanine was the runt of the litter. His mother threw him into the wild to die. He is now on a quest to find his mother and show her he was not as small and weak as she had thought. He has taken apositionn in the cold north as private, first class. Does he have what it takes to work his way up the ranking chart?
Picture:http://www.scriptsjoint.com/watermark/samplewatermarkimages/xwm_blackWolf.jpg Will someone fix it for me?
IC:Kanine looked at the female fox. "You don't understand." He turned around and sat on his haunches. "You never have and you never will. You had a mother, but I have an enemy." He got up and paced for a while, then walked away mumbling about his mother, head hanging, and tail between his legs.

[Northern Light]

Sorry, that's kind of short. Could you make it longer? Also, I think it would be easier for us if you would change your name to that of your character. And, if you would have read the rules you would have noticed you can find the ranks here;

www.thefoxholes.proboards82.com/index.cgi?board=suggestions&action=display&thread=1176053196

lol. ^^; Yesyes, I'm not making this easy for you Darks!

[drgloom]

hmm *tickles light to death* muhuhuhuhuhuha

[Kanine]

Done.

[۝ Etapa ۝]

It's still a bit too short, and I must point out that "teen" is not a good indicator of age... What do you count as a teenage wolf? One? Three? Six months? Please be a little more specific... And just a side note, using copyrighted pictures for your char is generally a bad idea.

[Sendiri™]

^{Mhmm. You should use a realistic picture of a black wolf or a picture you drew yourself, otherwise you could get into some big trouble with the artist. Also, like Whisper said, if you had a teenaged wolf, they'd be close to their death. If you mean they behave like a teenager human, than you should change it to 9 months - 2 years or so. Just a brilliant suggestion....
Lengthen your Personality and your Appearance. Try putting them into sentences. If you are brain dead with writers' block, describe something. If you've got a new picture, look the picture from head to toe and describe the shades of color. Around the eyes. Down by the belly. Claws - Sharp, short, long, dull? Legs - Long, Athletic, Short, Slow, Stubby? Ears - Round, Pointy, Keen Hearing, Deaf?
Just go on and on. That's what I did with my charactor, Sendiri.}