Fennick's Story

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(Ok, I just joined so I'd like to say hi. Agh, I know haven't figured out every thing, I'll be updating my font and siggy later. This is the first time I've introduced this character, why not try something new =D. I don't think I'm breaking any rules, I hope I'm not, I'm pretty sure I'm not, but please point it out to me if I'm touching a boundary. Introduction in the next post.)

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He bawled for his mama. "Mama!" he cried. "Mama!" But she was gone. "MAMA!" Beginning to run, he left long dragging tracks in the snow, only being a pup he could parely get out of it. His ears pressed to his head as he began to cry out in cold and in longing. She was gone, gone, that was the only thing he could think of. "MAMA!" He gave it one last bark knowing that she would never answer again.

The sun ahead was like a drop of blood in the paling blue sky. He whimpered in pain as a jagged stick poking out cut through his back right paw, tail two. Soon after he curled himself up in a tight ball, flecks of snow beginning to fall from a tree, soon to be joined by those falling from thick gray clouds that were fast approaching through the darkening sky. He was scared and alone, not wanting to be in the dark.

Black eyes shimmering painfully he closed them wishing to block it all out. The growls, the snarls, as she had fought to save him and his sisters. No one could have helped, they overpowered her and killed her. He had been a coward and ran passing his sisters who were bloody in the snow. His stomach knotted, he could never eat again. He was afraid they would follow and track him down, what had they done? His heart was still racing. His fur, barely grown in was a dark red in places but mostly black. Paws tipped in white, tail being the same as if it had been dipped in paint gave him the usual foxish look. A spire, a swirl, ran up his front right leg, being white giving him more character. But he only looked scare.

Flakes began to fall, he balled up tighter, breathing unsteadily.

That had been only three years before, three long years. Now fully grown he raced through the forest, paws padding the snow easily. Dark red fadded into black around the tail and shoulder blades, the rest of the reddish color he had had as a pup was gone. His face was more wisened, dark eyes searching out as he crested a hill. Looking out upon the stars, cool as they were shining he was no longer afraid of the dark. It was his fighting will now, it was what drove him int he war.

Baring his fangs to the open air, they were a sparkly white, white as the snow around him. He sniffed the air, his black nose flexing. Twitching his left ear, the very tip white, he wrinkled his nose at a smell trying to define it but gave up after a bit, it was far to faint. He needed to eat; his stomach an empty pit.

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(That was ok...)

[Cheeto]

I think its very good!!! But, I don't have the authority to say you can join...

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(Ty, well until then, I guess I'll keep to myself. *hides in corner with cookie jar* Shh...I'm in hiding. So if I don't get to joint then I guess it will be deleted. =P Thanks.)

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*join

[Cheeto]

It would be nice if you displayed our gender. Not that you have to though.

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(Hmm...like I said up above, haven't figured everything out. I'm a girl...I can't find anything. I feel so stupid right now.)

[[ tay ]]

Accepted! You need to put the age, gender, and what side your on though!

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Age: 3 and a half
Gender: Male
Side: I suppose dark

Thank you very much. *bows*

[((~~Kovik~~))]

Grr Shadow! Lol XD
You always get there first ^^

[Northern Light]

^{Yay, orsoes!
I'm really happy you came.
'tis Buck here. (;}

[[ tay ]]

I told yall I'm on like 24/7!

[((~~Kovik~~))]

I don't come on as much I guess lol ^^
Anyways, I might not be on much next week because I'm doing another blasted hike! Just thought you might want to know... *is amazed at own randomness*

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(Yee. Wondering when I'd see you Buck. Yeah, I won't be on much in the next month, I'll be moving and all, going back to the states =(. But anyways I'll get on whenever I can. Ok, now to see if I can jump into the rp.)

[Sendiri™]

Welcome to the Dark side. ^^ Oh man! -cracks up- I sound like Darth Vador! Hehe!

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(Ohh oh, in German one of the most well known scenes in Star Wars, Darth Vader is awesome...)

Vader: Luke ich bin deinen vatter.
Luke: NEEEIIIINNNNNNN!

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(Hrrm, I asumme that we can have more than one character...maybe I'll make another one...)

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(Just going to put their intros there, just to try it out.)

He jammed his nose deep into the snow and sniffed, bringing it out covered in snow. He still coldn't smell anything, no burrows, no old tracks, nothing. Laying down, head on his paws he closed his eyes to rest for a minute, bringing his pearly white tail close to his right cheek. He heard a faint noise and crimson red eyes shot open. The albino blended well with the snow and snuggled down deeper into the snow, his relatively large slender frame shivering a bit in the snow. He closed his eyes again becomming nothing but a white form being covered in snow.

Then a tongue began to lick his head, his right ear popped up from being pressed to his head and twitched in annoyance. "Stop," he moaned. "Elsie." His pearly white fangs hung out of his jaw as he turned his head to look at his female companion.

She nestled down into the snow dropping a rather fat, rather alive squirrel. She played with it some and then smothered it with her paws, killing it within a few minutes. Her red fr ruffled in a slight wind her black muzzle going down to eat some. She nudged it towards the albino. "You should eat," she said. "Your going to die if you don't."

He ate some reluctantly. Opening his mouth to speak, nose now covered in blood, she cut him off. "Godfrey, we can't go on like this any longer. We need to find others, just to pal around with, just to make sure we eat, just to make sure we have people looking out for us. I mean we're a good pair together but you get annoying." Her beautiful auburn tail flicked around some to curl around her paws as she looked at him with her beautiful stunning brown eyes.

"Elsie," he said standing, the squirrel finished. She stood too, slightly smaller than he. "Your not mom, I know we need to find somebody and I'm working on it, we're working on it."

She licked his muzzle clean. "You look better that way," she said.

"Stop," he complained and ran off. She began to follow chasing him, black paws hitting the ground. The both of them only four summers old.

(They stumble across the good side...)

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*fur not fr