Post by "FANTASiA" on Jan 1, 2008 7:11:44 GMT -5
Okay.
The Good News; I have a super new plot-idea. It involves battles, betrayal, bloodshed, deceit, murder, torture and pain. (That it, if someone accepts it/the characters.)
The Bad News; I’d have to be given an allowance to have five characters for a time. These two’ll die before long. I promise.
The Good News; This plot will try to involve everyone, some personally. These two characters are based mainly on the real people. You know, take over the world.
The Bad News; Someone has to kill these brutes.
Firstly, I have to introduce:
Let us start at the beginning.
[History] Hitler was born into a large army of wolves and was part of a litter of six. Only he and his sister reached past puppy hood because of excessive disease and hunting. Hitler was treated badly by his father who often gave him wounds and beat him. His family was not well off and had to often move from one area to another in search of food and shelter. The alpha treated everyone like dirt, yet no-one stood up to him because they were afraid. Hitler grew into a very insecure wolf. He rebelled against his father and army. After countless restless nights, as a young grown wolf, he ran away.
Napoleon began life as a pup born into a well-known army. He was popular with armys outside his own. He took up being an ordinary soldier in his area before climbing to greater positions. He was protector of the land. But it did not fulfill his longing to rise to higher, better titles. He left his army in the greedy search for fame and glory.
It was soon after these two had run away that they came across the Foxholes land. They saw it was rich and glorious and felt a need to dominate the armies. Napoleon and Hitler met each other, and, seeing a similarity in each other’s dreams, formed a plan whilst becoming good friends.
[Plans] Both wolves came up with the same amounts of ideas to invade the land. Hitler proposed he work as a Dark and Napoleon a Light. Their ideas were many and not all too confident. There were loopholes.
Napoleon would begin by making an announcement to offer ‘the most important canine in the Light army’ a gift of a rare and healing flower. He would then not give it to the leader, but to a mere Private or Second-In-Command. This would cause jealously and mistrust in the army. He would continue playing on it by using public conversations with the victim to make it seem as if that fox/wolf was in an alliance and was acting as spy. The Lights would be forced to pick a side.
Meanwhile Hitler would have directly challenged the Dark leader, and use glorious and manipulative speeches to get soldiers on his side. He would put off the fight of the leader for days while playing with words and charm and snaking his way through the army. When he did rise to his own challenge, the outcome did not matter, what mattered was what his and the other’s supporters had to say to each other. Insults, accusations. The Darks to would be fighting among themselves.
Then, in the midst of domestic discontent, a battle would arise. Darks vs. Lights. Yet who exactly would each side be fighting. Once the disheartened and bloodstained armies had exhausted themselves, Napoleon and Hitler would arise, promising a unity of armies and equal share of land. Of course, they planned to kill each other as soon as become leader, but that’s beside the point. Beloved leaders would have been overthrown, friends killed, and love dispelledand hatred and mistrust grown.
Yes, it had many, many flaws. But is just could work.
Divide and conquer.
This is the part where I tell you that it will not work and the Lgiht and Dark armies will overcome these menaces. It’s just to throw excitement in.
Also, as these two will be killed soon, I’m not putting effort into their profiles
Character’s Name: Hitler
Age: Old enough
Gender: Male
Species: Wolf
Alliance: Dark
Desired Position: Well, Leader. Duh. –points above- But now, Private.
Personality: This wolf doesn’t know sympathy. He is, however, all too familiar with envy, rage, conceit, desire, pride and other malicious emotions. He has two sides, though one is a sure fake: his real, evil side, and his charming, wouldn’t-hurt-a-fly side.
Appearance: A lighter underbelly fades darker into a deep black back. This wolf is large, muscular and strong, and you can see it. His nose is white, as are the points above his eyes, chest, feet, and ear tips. His fur is long and always full of some foul plant. His mouth is dirty and caked, and his claws are like those of a rat.
History: See above.
Picture:
Character’s Name: Napoleon
Age: Also old enough
Gender: Male
Species: Wolf
Alliance: Light
Desired Position: Ordinary Private. For now. Dundunduuun!
Personality: An arrogant figure with a waddle like a fly flew into his… His pride and uncaring attitude makes him think he is above all. He talks with a French accent and orders all around. His confidence is plain annoying. He shows no emotion but is a coward at heart, and a good actor.
Appearance: With his chestnut-tawny outer coat and lighter undercoat, he is rather beautiful. But that’s no excuse for the radiated arrogance he displays. His darker paws fade into his brown coat. His eyes are bright and focused, his body lean and tense at all times.
History: See above.
Picture:
Do I have to do IC? Or put these criminals in my siggie? And... this took a long time. So please don't openly unkindly critsize, like 'what an idiotic plan!' I can take hints, though. Or gently let me down... XD
EDIT; Not hatred dispelled, you idiot. -headdesk-
The Good News; I have a super new plot-idea. It involves battles, betrayal, bloodshed, deceit, murder, torture and pain. (That it, if someone accepts it/the characters.)
The Bad News; I’d have to be given an allowance to have five characters for a time. These two’ll die before long. I promise.
The Good News; This plot will try to involve everyone, some personally. These two characters are based mainly on the real people. You know, take over the world.
The Bad News; Someone has to kill these brutes.
But, before I get too carried away, let me introduce:
Napoleon & Hitler
[[No offence in the mentioning of, and altering of the leader Hitler. Ya’ll know where I come from and frankly, our country wasn’t over-involved. Don’t get me wrong, I do not like Hitler. But just in case someone thinks this is meant to hurt, no.
Oh, and Napoleon either.
I just used them ‘cos they tried to take over the world and could have been psychopaths.]]
Napoleon & Hitler
[[No offence in the mentioning of, and altering of the leader Hitler. Ya’ll know where I come from and frankly, our country wasn’t over-involved. Don’t get me wrong, I do not like Hitler. But just in case someone thinks this is meant to hurt, no.
Oh, and Napoleon either.
I just used them ‘cos they tried to take over the world and could have been psychopaths.]]
Firstly, I have to introduce:
The Plot:
Let us start at the beginning.
[History] Hitler was born into a large army of wolves and was part of a litter of six. Only he and his sister reached past puppy hood because of excessive disease and hunting. Hitler was treated badly by his father who often gave him wounds and beat him. His family was not well off and had to often move from one area to another in search of food and shelter. The alpha treated everyone like dirt, yet no-one stood up to him because they were afraid. Hitler grew into a very insecure wolf. He rebelled against his father and army. After countless restless nights, as a young grown wolf, he ran away.
Napoleon began life as a pup born into a well-known army. He was popular with armys outside his own. He took up being an ordinary soldier in his area before climbing to greater positions. He was protector of the land. But it did not fulfill his longing to rise to higher, better titles. He left his army in the greedy search for fame and glory.
It was soon after these two had run away that they came across the Foxholes land. They saw it was rich and glorious and felt a need to dominate the armies. Napoleon and Hitler met each other, and, seeing a similarity in each other’s dreams, formed a plan whilst becoming good friends.
[Plans] Both wolves came up with the same amounts of ideas to invade the land. Hitler proposed he work as a Dark and Napoleon a Light. Their ideas were many and not all too confident. There were loopholes.
Napoleon would begin by making an announcement to offer ‘the most important canine in the Light army’ a gift of a rare and healing flower. He would then not give it to the leader, but to a mere Private or Second-In-Command. This would cause jealously and mistrust in the army. He would continue playing on it by using public conversations with the victim to make it seem as if that fox/wolf was in an alliance and was acting as spy. The Lights would be forced to pick a side.
Meanwhile Hitler would have directly challenged the Dark leader, and use glorious and manipulative speeches to get soldiers on his side. He would put off the fight of the leader for days while playing with words and charm and snaking his way through the army. When he did rise to his own challenge, the outcome did not matter, what mattered was what his and the other’s supporters had to say to each other. Insults, accusations. The Darks to would be fighting among themselves.
Then, in the midst of domestic discontent, a battle would arise. Darks vs. Lights. Yet who exactly would each side be fighting. Once the disheartened and bloodstained armies had exhausted themselves, Napoleon and Hitler would arise, promising a unity of armies and equal share of land. Of course, they planned to kill each other as soon as become leader, but that’s beside the point. Beloved leaders would have been overthrown, friends killed, and love dispelledand hatred and mistrust grown.
Yes, it had many, many flaws. But is just could work.
Divide and conquer.
This is the part where I tell you that it will not work and the Lgiht and Dark armies will overcome these menaces. It’s just to throw excitement in.
Also, as these two will be killed soon, I’m not putting effort into their profiles
Character’s Name: Hitler
Age: Old enough
Gender: Male
Species: Wolf
Alliance: Dark
Desired Position: Well, Leader. Duh. –points above- But now, Private.
Personality: This wolf doesn’t know sympathy. He is, however, all too familiar with envy, rage, conceit, desire, pride and other malicious emotions. He has two sides, though one is a sure fake: his real, evil side, and his charming, wouldn’t-hurt-a-fly side.
Appearance: A lighter underbelly fades darker into a deep black back. This wolf is large, muscular and strong, and you can see it. His nose is white, as are the points above his eyes, chest, feet, and ear tips. His fur is long and always full of some foul plant. His mouth is dirty and caked, and his claws are like those of a rat.
History: See above.
Picture:
Character’s Name: Napoleon
Age: Also old enough
Gender: Male
Species: Wolf
Alliance: Light
Desired Position: Ordinary Private. For now. Dundunduuun!
Personality: An arrogant figure with a waddle like a fly flew into his… His pride and uncaring attitude makes him think he is above all. He talks with a French accent and orders all around. His confidence is plain annoying. He shows no emotion but is a coward at heart, and a good actor.
Appearance: With his chestnut-tawny outer coat and lighter undercoat, he is rather beautiful. But that’s no excuse for the radiated arrogance he displays. His darker paws fade into his brown coat. His eyes are bright and focused, his body lean and tense at all times.
History: See above.
Picture:
Do I have to do IC? Or put these criminals in my siggie? And... this took a long time. So please don't openly unkindly critsize, like 'what an idiotic plan!' I can take hints, though. Or gently let me down... XD
EDIT; Not hatred dispelled, you idiot. -headdesk-