Bob Cat

[Bob Cat]

Character’s name: christine
Gender: female
Alliance: dark
Desired Position: sos
Personality:funny, she gets angry easily i f you get on her dark side. loes fun alot!!
Appearance: she is white with black .
History: she grew up practially alone.
Picture: photo.net/photo/pcd1647/bobcat-49.4.jpg

IC:

Christine walked with a heavy beat, just wanting to have a little fun because today just had to be a day for something special. Anything! That's what every day felt like to her though. Like...Christmas morning on the perfect day for swimming. She was sort of like The sun and the moon tied into one soul, for this angel could be just as mean and sneaky as she is kind. Don't anger her, Yah foo.

[akuju]

Hmm... I'm not a mod, but I'd still say what you've written isn't adequte.

Your grammar seems to need some working on, and one short sentance on appearance really isn't telling us much. The history also needs some work...

Shiz. I also need to say, that no cat characters are currently allowed in the foxholes. You'll have to change your character into a canine, or make a completely new one.

Not attacking you or anything, just trying to help out. ^^

[Sakitu]

Yes, what Miss Whisper here said. For this character to be accepted, you need a solid paragraph for History, Personality, and the Description. Also, it is true, no more Cat characters are being allowed at the time. Also, don't use chat speak, in character. I'm reffering to "Yah foo."