Rukali

[Rukali/Samisu]

Character’s name: Rukali
Age: Adolescents
Breed: Grey wolf
Gender: Female
Alliance: Dark
Desired Rank: Colonel
Personality: When provoked, Rukali will attack, but being the softy that she is, she will also be a kind, loving wolf to all those whom are kind to her, or dark.
Appearance: Her pelt is misty gray, making her very camouflaged in shady areas. She has golden eyes, making her very prone to scaring the living daylights out of other wolves and foxes, if you chance upon seeing her.
History: As a pup, Rukali was an individual. She didn't play with the other pups. She just sat alone, watching them, but as she grew older, she was accepted as one of the pack, making her a very good colonel, watching instead of attacking without thought.

Picture:http://yukondelta.fws.gov/images/graywolf.jpg
IC: As Rukali glanced around at her surroundings, she realized she was not alone. There, off in the distance, stood a wolf. A pure black wolf. It beckoned too her in a silent motion. As she walked toward it, she realized that she wasn't moving. She ran, but couldn't break free of the thing constraining her in place. Then, sweating, she awakened.

[Kero Jana]

Hello. This is Kero Jana speaking to you. I don't want this to come off as mean, bossy, or to push you in any way which would lead you away from this board, but you got to calm down. You can't just go off and post in random spots when your character has yet to even be accepted. I'm saying this because a good percentage of the places which you did post in are dead at the moment. (ex Operation Far Cry) that battle ended about eight months ago. there is no need for further posting there and adding to it disrupts everything especially how it ended.

As well as the medics den you posted in. That thread won't be going anywhere either. You need to put your character in threads which are alive and still moving. by this I mean that people are constantly posting in, especially if you want to RP. But as I said before, you still need to wait for an Admin to accept your character. Until its done, your charcter is going to keep getting ignorded wherever you post in the storyline. You can post in the OOC section of the foxholes board. It's made especially for those who are waiting for acceptance and even for those who are waiting for someone to post.

I would suggest that you PM an admins name or make a thread in the OOC section in order to recieve help.

*looks at your title bar*

"oops, spoke to soon..." should have refreshed before saying all that. disreguard this message if you find it to discouraging. ^^;

*goes back to gathering post.*

[<>Cronos<>Thyca<>]

Kero is totally right here. I will be blunt, god so help me.

YOU are but one person, and as a pesron it is ultimatley possible to be in but ONE spot at a time. AND half of the stuff you posted in is dead. ALWAYS check the dates before you post. Anything older than a few months DONT post.

FIX these things, and if you have any more questions, ask someone else.

[Northern Light]

Where's all the staff at? I'm seriously going to fire some people... XD Kero will accept you once your bio if fixed, ok? I'm suspended from the computer, so I can't check back.

& Thyca, it doesn't really matter if a character is in two places at once. Nothing like that it stated in the rules, even though it IS kind of weird...

[Kero Jana]

Now hold everything.... I'm no moderator. I have no power to accept anyone. What good does it do me, her, or anyone for me to just walk up to some one and say.

"Hi I liked your Bio ACCEPTED...^^"

I'll tell you what. Nothing, thats what. and until an actual moderator or admin comes in to sort all of this out. What good are my own words of criticism?

Ugh.... forget it. Light gave me a job so I should finish it.

sorry for my thoughts above. I'm not mad about anything. I just felt that they had to be said. Let's begin.

Alright.... first off. You say that your wolf is an adolescent. Alright, now I have a question about this. Whats your term of adolescent. Early teens? Late? 7 months? a year? two years? Because with animals it's hard to tell between adolescent and elders even to this day. Whether they are in there prime, or on the verge of dieing. It's really hard to get an actual depiction of your wolf's age.

In your personality you speak of Rukali as kind to those who are even dark, yet when provoked she attacks. This is a good depiction of her judgement and actions, but I still can't get a feeling for how she is kind towards others. what are her mannerisms? explain how she is kind to those whom are dark. Just throwing a bunch of words on a piece of paper doesn't make much sense, if you don't make much effort towards it.

In your character sheet, I noticed how short everything is. Normally this wouldn't be much of a problem, but if I'm not mistaken. You're new to this board. In order for us to gauge how well you roleplay. Where do you think we would look first. If you were a usual roleplayer which got on everyday and had been posting normally racking up your number of post then this wouldn't be a problem. But if I'm not mistaken. You haven't been to this site before and this would be your first time here. Your character sheet is a representation of yourself as much as it is your character. How people rate you depends on how well you are able to assess things and use your head in given situations.

Anything you write in it can be changed with a click of a button.

So what I would suggest to you is to look back through your character sheet and revise your history and post your picture in your character sheet. It would help with the imagery which you are trying to portray to us.

Do this and you will be accepted.

PS. please get rid of the post in the other threads before Light finds out. ^^

[Rukali/Samisu]

I'm sorry..... I feel very stupid... Please stop mocking me.... Maybe you aren't but it feels like it. Inside my stomach it feels as though i've been punched..... Ok... I'm good now. *exhales and inhales. Repaets and then focuses* Whew...... Ok. Thanks. Sorry.. I'm used to Neopets where nothing in chat rooms die. someone always talks to you.

[Rukali/Samisu]

um....... My pic is messed. How do i show it?

[Rukali/Samisu]

ok..... um.... I'm accepted what? argh! I read stuff so late!

[Sakitu]

You aren't accepted just yet. You should read over what Kero posted this last time and fix everything that she mentioned. Then it shall be looked over and accepted, or there is always the case where you may need to add more as well.

[Rukali/Samisu]

Thank you! I'll try!

[Kero Jana]

*sigh*. I don't mean to be a party pooper. But I happen to be one of the few males on this board. no offense taken though Sakitu.

[Sakitu]

Ah right, sorries. xP I knew that. xD Just used to saying she. ^^

[Kero Jana]

thats alright. ^^ but does she know how to modify her post?

[Rukali/Samisu]

Thanks all! heehee

[Sakitu]

I don't think so...lets ask. xD Do you know how to modify your post, Mia?

[[Rune]]

okay, I know that you're all probably just going to get even more confused and frusterated that I'm adding my opinion to this matter, but let me just assure Mia that I'm not here to critisize her. We all have to get used to these things, and she's right: it IS MUCH different than the Neopets chat boards, I would know. I also have a guild on neopets, and as she might be used to that more than proboards, where there are multiple boards and such, it can get realllyyyyy confusing. I remember my firest time on the FH, after Light 'recruited' me from a wolf roleplay over neopets. I was so confused, I couldn't even figure out how to post. (save for the quick reply, which RREEAALLLY came in handy XP )

I had just gone off, looking through all the posts, reading them and trying to determine the taste of the site. I even remember which thread it was that I had looked at. It was between Shadow and Raku, when shadow sings the song about 'time'. ANd someone was telling a newbie in the c-box that the c-box was not for roleplaying. It was for OOC, and fun XD

But anyways, I think I understand how Mia is confused about all this new stuff, and she really seems to be trying. Look at her last posts. She's acting rather calm, considering that she had just been 'yelled at' for reasons she did not yet understand. But she's getting the hang of it all, and I think she can prove to be a good member.

Mia, I truly think you can do well; And seriously, though our characters might bite, we don't, so feel free to ask questions and figure stuff out, K? XD welcome to the site^^

[drgloom]

you may not bite...but I do muhuhuhuhuhuhuha...soup anyone?

[<>Cronos<>Thyca<>]

As I said, I will help in anyway, considering I have helped Fang get decent at least to rp-ing, I will help in any way. I have to again say, ( yes again, in case you didnt see the other message.) I am not in my right mind recently, Finals are killing me. This just say, I am short tempered around finals. I didnt really mean to jump quiet so hard, and the first time the caps lock was on. I ment those to be more guiding, but it looks more mean than guiding.

By the way, I still say that humanity is a lost cause. Squids are so much better.

[Rukali/Samisu]

Thanks all. Yeah... So I modifyed my thingy. The uh.... Whatchamakalit... um.... the thing that you sent to people to be accepted. So, yes i can modify my post. I did it. See? My wolf pic is there and my avatar! I Love my stuff!

[Kero Jana]

Alright here's the problem.

I'm looking at the original character sheet right here.

Character’s name: Rukali
Age: Adolescents
Breed: Grey wolf
Gender: Female
Alliance: Dark
Desired Rank: Colonel
Personality: When provoked, Rukali will attack, but being the softy that she is, she will also be a kind, loving wolf to all those whom are kind to her, or dark.
Appearance: Her pelt is misty gray, making her very camouflaged in shady areas. She has golden eyes, making her very prone to scaring the living daylights out of other wolves and foxes, if you chance upon seeing her.
History: As a pup, Rukali was an individual. She didn't play with the other pups. She just sat alone, watching them, but as she grew older, she was accepted as one of the army, making her a very good colonel, watching instead of attacking without thought.

Picture:http://yukondelta.fws.gov/images/graywolf.jpg
IC: As Rukali glanced around at her surroundings, she realized she was not alone. There, off in the distance, stood a wolf. A pure black wolf. It beckoned too her in a silent motion. As she walked toward it, she realized that she wasn't moving. She ran, but couldn't break free of the thing constraining her in place. Then, sweating, she awakened.
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and it clearly states that you desire to be a dark. Yet you want to be a light.

you don't have to send the changes to anyone. Alright...? Heres the deal. At the top of where you first posted you'll see the thread name and when it was started. you'll then see the options 'quote' 'modify' and 'delete'. you click on modify in order to make changes to your old character sheet. Once you put your latest version of your character sheet in, over your 'old' then I'll be able to accept you. ok?